eh meteor shower feeling :oops: and nervous
just made this up, i just write the way i feel :lol:
white horses,
shooting stars,
was really a meteor shower,
was late november,
maybe early december
the night was clear,
the air was fresh,
a sign from space,
no need to race?
like a firework display,
i cannot convey,
that meteor shower,
lasted more than an hour.
if the world was ending,
no need pretending,
like traces of gunfire,
some came lower,
the sky was alive,
and i was waiting,
for white horses,
to arrive.
Precious-Earthquakes- 09-12-2005
Well, I like it, especially it being from the top of your head.
Your name "danbit5" sounds familiar...are you from the sony board?
If so...IT'S ME PRECIOUS!!!!!! YAY MEEEE!!!!
OK that is all,
Precious
raspswirl- 09-12-2005
I enjoyed that. You're really good. Hope to see more of your stuff. :)
Joe- 09-12-2005
thanks for joining! and having the courage to make a poem your first post! .... it's really good, keep it up!
thanks again!
JustAnotherLight- 09-12-2005
Re: eh meteor shower feeling :oops: and nervous
just made this up, i just write the way i feel :lol:
white horses,
shooting stars,
was really a meteor shower,
was late november,
maybe early december
the night was clear,
the air was fresh,
a sign from space,
no need to race?
like a firework display,
i cannot convey,
that meteor shower,
lasted more than an hour.
if the world was ending,
no need pretending,
like traces of gunfire,
some came lower,
the sky was alive,
and i was waiting,
for white horses,
to arrive.
I told you you'd like it here, you DO like it here, right?
Your poem is cool! I love expression, and TORI FANS!!! That's why I invited you here. Have a blast on this board. So much to do, so much to do. Hm, what will I do next, change my pics? No, not yet.
But I will add a couple smilies, a devil, and then make it ALL pink...like Precious would say, weeeeeeeeeeeee.
Welcome to the family! :lol: :lol: :twisted:
PickOutYourCloud- 09-12-2005
Beautiful poem! I've had the pleasure of seeing a meteor shower before and you describe it wonderfully. Welcome to the club! Share more!
Precious-Earthquakes- 09-13-2005
SO IT IS YOU DANBIT5!!!!!!!
Like JAl said I would say...WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
fun fun fun fun, dee ha ha HAH HAHAHAHAHAHA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HA HA HA HA HAAAAAAAA HA AHA BWAAA HA HA HA HA...I feel so add right now. I feel wired...I just got up from a long nap, now I need to do homework.
Homework can wait, this place is more important. Although I have a big quiz tommorw, actually I have two.
la dee da dee da HA HA AHA HAAAAHAHDHFsdyhfasjdhgfsied,
Precious
Talula- 09-14-2005
That is so pretty...very descriptive. You can picture the images you write about. Keep it up, good work :D
SteelLily- 09-14-2005
very lovely.
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