Home Sick from the sky I was flying back to Colorado from home in NYC.
East coast calling
Big foots print
Seen well in form from the sky
Indentations and mounds
Shadows of the natural
Creating pictures in my mind
Rainbowesque horizons
Oh to dive through
White cotton candied sky
PickOutYourCloud- 09-04-2005
Very nice.
I love flying and looking out the window.
You capture it well
SteelLily- 09-04-2005
i adore the last line. very nice.
vehnillamasochist- 09-04-2005
I thank you... :D
Joe- 09-04-2005
I like...
When I fly I just want to jump out the window and walk on the clouds... too bad I'd fall to my death, but it's a pleasent thought.
raspswirl- 09-11-2005
Beautiful. The first line draged me in... I'm from the East Coast. Very nice poem. :)
JustAnotherLight- 09-11-2005
I'm an east coast guy myself.
Very nice visual...peaceful and beautiful.
vehnillamasochist- 09-11-2005
Thanks all... :D
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