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vehnillamasochist- 09-04-2005
Home Sick from the sky
I was flying back to Colorado from home in NYC. East coast calling Big foots print Seen well in form from the sky Indentations and mounds Shadows of the natural Creating pictures in my mind Rainbowesque horizons Oh to dive through White cotton candied sky

PickOutYourCloud- 09-04-2005

Very nice. I love flying and looking out the window. You capture it well

SteelLily- 09-04-2005

i adore the last line. very nice.

vehnillamasochist- 09-04-2005

I thank you... :D

Joe- 09-04-2005

I like... When I fly I just want to jump out the window and walk on the clouds... too bad I'd fall to my death, but it's a pleasent thought.

raspswirl- 09-11-2005

Beautiful. The first line draged me in... I'm from the East Coast. Very nice poem. :)

JustAnotherLight- 09-11-2005

I'm an east coast guy myself. Very nice visual...peaceful and beautiful.

vehnillamasochist- 09-11-2005

Thanks all... :D

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