I almost & Endless
I was almost letting go Yesterday you had something to show: The river we used to run, the tree by the river... That theatre we used to go Those friends we still know And you held my hand, looking deep into my eyes, my soul I can't believe I almost let go (Now I've let go, I had to and that proves the irony of life. When you want it, you don't get it, and vice versa. We are still friends) Endless How can you receive love if you don't love yourself And how can you love yourself if you don't receive love? It has to start somewhere Love grows when it's planted once How can you lose the love if you try so hard And how can you try so hard if you lose the love? Could make this endless But this can be stopped Love cannot

Lynna, I loved them both. The second one 'Endless' spoke to me a little more than the first. Great work. Post more :D

very very good and moving. I really like the first one. :) Please post more!

LOL you guys don't have anything bad to say, do ya? :D Thank you for your precious comments, I haven't been sharing much writings lately. You make me smile! Damn! I want to give you this little something I am bound to write in a Valentine card: Would you love me without my make up, would you love without my clothes? Would you love me if I had a haircut, would you love me when I go old?

Hopefully you'll keep posting your stuff. I really enjoy reading your thoughts and understand where you're going with them. :) Also, any guy better love you regardless. so fuck the makeup, fuck the clothes forget the hair 'cause it still grows. Love's forever, as we all know And one day, we'll all be old :wink:

lol, I love both of your guys' little poems there!

Thhehhee, the problem is, I don't have anyone to give the card to :roll: But I consider it as a relieve. You are right with that. I think I should write it in the other side of the card if I ever make one.

i like it very much.