I cannot write worth crap, but OK...

I cannot write worth crap, but OK...
Now, keep in mind I am young and naive and know nothing about life, so this mught be like reading crap. I feel like dieing I am so nervous. WEEEEEEEEE..here we go. The Devil at your doorstep I feel the eyes peirce deep They penetrate the soul The light in me burns out He understands what this is He knows he hurts But does he care? No Lust The poison coursing through his vains Taints the wool of white sheep We wonder in his dark cave No cries hear No cries made Cries only whispered Cries only thought Give me suggestions. How can I improve (a lot). la dee da dee da Oh, that was it...this post is over. NOW GET REPLYING!!! JEEZ!! Precious

Well, I love it Precious! You express your feelings well. You're a cool cat! (I miss you) JAL now back to homework...so sad...have no life...

BTW, did you get my responses to the PM's you sent me? Please let me know how you are doing, I worry you know.

I really like it, especially the "Lust the posion coursing through his veins taints the wool of white sheep" part. Keep writing! I'd love to see more.

Thank you! and JAL...no I haven't gotten your replies. Are you sending them to Precious-Earthquakes or just Precious? Cause my name is Precious-Earthquakes. la dee da dee da, Precious

i like it. you expressed your feelings very well. i think you should keep writing. the more you write and the more you share, the better you get.

Thank you! and JAL...no I haven't gotten your replies. Are you sending them to Precious-Earthquakes or just Precious? Cause my name is Precious-Earthquakes. la dee da dee da, Precious How about Ms. Earthquakes? picky, picky. :?

JustAnotherLight- Just rewrite evrything and make sure you send it to the right person. If you have already sent those to the right name, i don't know what to tell you cause I didn't get them. sorry, Precious

Now I'm irritated. I sent you PM's in response to the PM's you sent me. Where are they? I'm so confused. I misunderstood your last post but I know what you mean now. I still don't understand what happened to my replies though. You wrote me about your aunt and other "stuff", I was concerned and wrote you back. You didn't get those? :?

i dont like the devil :evil: i think i am in that cave :wink:

I just read this again and I really do love it. I have no suggestion except to say to keep writing more. It's very good!

I wrote one last night, but I tried to rhyme and it was hard, but I will post it later. I am to lazy, Precious

I'm lazy today too. I have to go study Sign Language now. I have a friend coming over tonight to video me telling a story in sign (The Tortoise and The Hare), I have to do it for a project for the class. I'm a little nervous and could use more practice. Gotta go...

That's cool JAL, I know sign language myself. My cousin is deaf and I practically grew up with her. :D It's such a cool language to know. Good Luck with all your school work. :P

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