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raspswirl- 09-10-2005
Let It Out..
I love to write lyrics and poetry as well as many others on this board. However I rarely display my stuff b/c I'm afraid of being criticised. Nevertheless, everyone in this community is so supportive and understanding, I figured Why Not? So here's something I just thought up.... Let It Out I know you hide the pain I know you hide your tears I know you've run away You've been running for years I see it in your eyes I see it behind your smile I hear it in your voice It's been there for a while You just say it - I can listen But you can't take it - You're about to give in Just let it out - It just might help C'mon and let it out - C'mon and be yourself. I feel what you feel And I know what you're going through I feel like this isn't real This isn't what we're meant to do We keep hiding the pain We still hide the tears as well We keep running away Girls I ran until I fell.

SteelLily- 09-10-2005

i love it. i think it's fantastic.

PickOutYourCloud- 09-10-2005

I like it as well. Song lyrics are difficult, but you make it seem so easy! Post more if you have them!

raspswirl- 09-10-2005

Thank you Lilly & Cloud. You're so sweet. :)

Precious-Earthquakes- 09-10-2005

Girl you got a gift. Is that lyrics? You should fund a composer and send it to them. OMG...MAYBE YOU COULD SEND IT TO TORI AND SHE COULD WRITE THE MUSIC AND PERFORM IT!!!!!! OMG...DO IT!!!!!! When I read that it reminded me of my moms story. Her parents (my grandparents) made her a book cause she wasn't being herself and inside the cover it said, "We hope you let your sunlight shine again." My mom was 2 years old. Really sad. Makes you want to kill sometimes. la dee da dee da, BUT IT IS TIME TO BE HAPPY!!! WEEKEND YAY!!! Precious

raspswirl- 09-10-2005

Oh Precious, You are so very precious. That would be funny if I did have the balls to send my stuff to Tori. One day maybe it'll all be out for the world to see :lol: But thanks again for taking the time to view and respond. You're the BESTTTTT!!!!!!

Precious-Earthquakes- 09-10-2005

It is nice to know I am the bestttttt, but it is hard to pronounce that many Ts in a row. TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT, Precious I HAVE GAS! sorry, I feel better when I let things that hurt me out, and gas is one of those things sometimes.

JustAnotherLight- 09-10-2005

Precious~ You are truly a mess! Raspswirl ~ First of all, glad you got a pic! Your words are wonderful. I just love expression, especially in word form. You've got a nack for it! Love it.

Precious-Earthquakes- 09-10-2005

Well, gas can be a problem you need to let out sometimes. Most of the time physically. hee hee...o, there I blow, oops, Precious

JustAnotherLight- 09-10-2005

you're wrong, just wrong...but I love ya anyway. hey, is this the face you make when you PHYSICALLY pass wind? :shock: Why did you bring this topic up?

raspswirl- 09-10-2005

Thanks JAL, yeah I finally figured out that picture thing. Gosh, it was confusing. Hey, Precious, Do you feel better after letting loose? I usually do.

Precious-Earthquakes- 09-10-2005

:x no i make this one, then when it smells I make this one :? Then when I realize that that stinker might be more than just air I make this one :shock: then when I have relieved myself I make this one :D The reason I got on that subject is cause the title is "Let it out" and there are a few lines that can be compared to gas...and I have it, so I put them together. hee hee, Precious

raspswirl- 09-10-2005

I have to tell you that you are something else. Thanks for making me laugh I needed it. :lol:

Precious-Earthquakes- 09-10-2005

I LOOOVe the smilies and I had an excuse to use them in a humoress matter. You know, I just thought that maybe I could be a comedian. YOu know how everyone was put on earth for a reason. I think my reason was for making poeple laugh and feel good. I love to do that, and I think I found my purpose, well, the none paying one that is. feels good,...making poeple laugh does that is...I don't know what you were thinking. Precious

JustAnotherLight- 09-10-2005

Precious ~ That was funny :!:

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