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danbit5- 09-23-2005
moon craters
this is when i got more vodka than blood flowing. :oops: circumstances, chances, fate make believe open that gate take a seat command demand id rather walk dont talk things i know no winter here just a show forget the snow lol we know moon and tide whats it hide well jupiter defends us to the end frosted fields reminds me of one thing glaciers that shifted and me that drifted

PickOutYourCloud- 09-24-2005

very nice! I really like the last stanza the best. Vodka can be your friend! :)

Lynna- 09-24-2005

vodka is baad, but the poem is funny. what's the..gra-*test*-('") point of it?

danbit5- 09-24-2005

well basically all i was saying or trying to, was ever looked at the moon, it bears the scars of astroids, meteors, /cant grow over them. unlike earth. last meteors hit jupiter shimacher levy, that scientist is rubbing his hands. fame. though its true. anyway its about me at a low point when things are down. call it parania the evidence is there, just another fear to compete against. :twisted:

Lynna- 09-24-2005

^ Thanks! Writing is an amazing way to battle against our inner demons.

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