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raspswirl- 09-21-2005
My little song...
Bond I've known you way too long. We started this way back. You said that i'm the one. Oh I remember you sayin' that. After all these years - After all we been through Baby, we're still here - Yes, i'm still here with you~ You've tought me so much. You could answer anything I asked. "How do snakes love". "Do they coil on their backs"? And after all this time - After everything's been said. Our spark's still alive - Hey, it's still glowing~ Loving you is like breathing. having you is like i'm dreaming I know this obsession, can't be wrong and, they can't break this bond. I've done it all with you. We done things I'd never dream. All those things that lovers do. And boy, I've tried everything. After all these things - After hearts stop racing. I've got you holding me - My eyes, they are closing~ So I've known you for so long. This goes way back. I knew you were the one. I don't know if I ever told you that. Loving you is like breathing Having you is a dream and, I know this obsession Can't be wrong And I know they wont Break our bond. I was tired when I did this, and I just kept writing & writing and this is what came out. Now I need to go to bed...

SteelLily- 09-22-2005

aww i like it.

Talula- 09-22-2005

I like the imagery with the snakes, very cool :lol:

PickOutYourCloud- 09-22-2005

I like it too. Very good. I really like the line about the snakes as well. I love questions like that! :)

raspswirl- 09-22-2005

Thanks guys. I really love snakes and am always asking him questions about them :D You're all too sweeeeeeet :wink:

Lynna- 09-23-2005

It's romantic, very, i like it! The bond...I love that description, and sakes, yes. I've written about Bonds too, let me see if I can find it.. ...here it is, i used bond as a description for sex. Bond See how the earth shakes when you take me by your side Trust, it binds us together By now I should know this is no game As serious as it can ever get See how this unnameable makes its place in our souls that are bond First there was two, now there's just one

raspswirl- 09-23-2005

That was so deep. I loved it. How sexual and meaningful. Thanks for sharing. :D

danbit5- 09-23-2005

lynna is right.1 yet 2

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