Quick little poem When I look at you
Everything slides away
Nothing can interfere
With this joy
But behind the sunshine
The thunder growls
The distant rumble
A warning of what may come
Yet I feel you near me
Your presence in my very veins
The storm may come
But it will only be rain
JustAnotherLight- 09-11-2005
That's cool Cloud! It paints a picture for me. Love it.
PickOutYourCloud- 09-11-2005
Thanks again! :D
raspswirl- 09-11-2005
Behind the sunshine the thunder does growl. I love it. This one little poem reflects a lot in only a few verses. It really made me think and picture things. Good Job! :)
Precious-Earthquakes- 09-11-2005
I think there is a word for things that are short, but hold a lot.
Hold on, let me think of it, I am not used to using good vocab.
OK, I think it is "pithy" I think the word is "pithy."
OK, now my brain hurts, and I shouldn't ever try and think or talk like that again....ouch,
Precious
SteelLily- 09-11-2005
i love how you use imagery from nature to reflect human emotion. Nature inspires me so much and I always appreciate a good piece about it. I almost wanted to say nature infects me and I guess that is kind of true....you know what I mean, right? :?:
anyway, i like it.
PickOutYourCloud- 09-11-2005
i love how you use imagery from nature to reflect human emotion. Nature inspires me so much and I always appreciate a good piece about it. I almost wanted to say nature infects me and I guess that is kind of true....you know what I mean, right? :?:
anyway, i like it.
Definitely know what you mean. That's one of the things I love about your writing as well! Especially River God. And no, I won't write the rest of it! That's your baby and you tell her story so wonderfully! :D
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