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The Imploding Voice- 08-30-2005
Silent Forever
Hey, I've been writing lyrics every since I could remember, but up until recently, I didn't know the difference between an A-minor chord and a E-minor chord. Now that I have a guitar and I'm slowly learning, I've been rummaging through my dozens of journals, finding lyrics I could turn into songs. Anyways, here's a song I completed a few days ago. It may read as if it's a little incoherent, but it was all in the moment, so I didn't really want to go back and change it up. Silent Forever I'd be lying if I said I wasn't hurt And I know you'd see right through me With all the bullets fired and daggers thrown How could you even be in one piece? I'd be lying if I said I wasn't affected by this And I know I don't put on a very good show With all the pain and the emotional ride How could you leave without being affected as well? (Chorus) Now that times have changed and time has passed Have you been able to change at all? I've kept this quiet for way too long now Did you actually think I could stay silent forever? I'd be lying if I said it wasn't messy And I know I don't clean up pieces very well With punches being thrown and heads being blown off How could you say it ended bitterly? I'd be lying if I said I was sorry And I know you show no remorse With the constant verbal flames igniting How could you say we didn't crash and burn? (Chorus) What could we have done different? What crime have we committed? What part of it was forgettable, but neither one of us want to let go? (Chorus) Did you expect me to come back and bite you in the ass? -Chris

Joe- 08-30-2005
Re: Silent Forever
Did you expect me to come back and bite you in the ass? lmao! Actually I like it... it's really good. Can sense the alanis influence but its a little darker and I like that.

The Imploding Voice- 08-30-2005
Re: Silent Forever
Did you expect me to come back and bite you in the ass? lmao! Actually I like it... it's really good. Can sense the alanis influence but its a little darker and I like that. :lol: Thanks :) Yea, my band thought it sounded a lot like Hands Clean. I can see it, yea, and there is some Alanis influence in there, but I think it has my own style. :P

Mitholas- 08-31-2005

hmm I like it "I'd be lying if I said I was completely unscathed" comes to mind :) I didn't know you had a band..

The Imploding Voice- 08-31-2005

hmm I like it "I'd be lying if I said I was completely unscathed" comes to mind :) I didn't know you had a band.. I never realized that until now lmao. I guess it was too in the moment.

Mitholas- 08-31-2005

hmm I like it "I'd be lying if I said I was completely unscathed" comes to mind :) I didn't know you had a band.. I never realized that until now lmao. I guess it was too in the moment. it's still good :p

centre of the universe- 08-31-2005
Re: Silent Forever
I like this very much, but I found another thing really similar to Lani: "And I know you'd see right through me" I see right through you, I know right through! :lol:

vehnillamasochist- 09-04-2005

I think it is veryyyy gooooD!!!

SteelLily- 09-04-2005

very nice.

PickOutYourCloud- 09-04-2005

excellent. And I'm sure it sounds even better with music!

vehnillamasochist- 09-04-2005

I would love to read your stuff. I wish I was able to share it took me months to put up the Poem I wrote and gave to Tori in 2002.

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