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PickOutYourCloud- 10-08-2005
Smoke Descending
Well, I'm going to keep posting, even if no one's here to read it! :) ***************************************************** How did I get here? Lying naked in this dry riverbed? The sky is bleak Grey clouds veil the sun Rendering it a mere shadow of its powerful self The hills surround me Covered in trees Now merely kindling As the flames gorge themselves Black smoke rises lazily And drifts back down upon the destruction What beauty must have been here! The trees, the river, the birds But now it is a hollow skeleton A bridge lies up ahead What need is there for it now? Soon it too will be devoured As will I.

danbit5- 10-09-2005

its hard to comment on this one. makes me sad. the bridge was very interesting but you said soon it will be devoured too. :( sadly i think i know what your saying. anyway even at that i like it.

vehnillamasochist- 10-10-2005

I feel like that all of the time it feels like

PickOutYourCloud- 10-10-2005

thank you both for your comments. I'm always glad to see people's reaction. I really appreciate it.

vehnillamasochist- 10-11-2005

U r most welcome!

Talula- 10-12-2005

oh my God I love it!

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