Smoke Descending Well, I'm going to keep posting, even if no one's here to read it! :)
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How did I get here?
Lying naked in this dry riverbed?
The sky is bleak
Grey clouds veil the sun
Rendering it a mere shadow of its powerful self
The hills surround me
Covered in trees
Now merely kindling
As the flames gorge themselves
Black smoke rises lazily
And drifts back down upon the destruction
What beauty must have been here!
The trees, the river, the birds
But now it is a hollow skeleton
A bridge lies up ahead
What need is there for it now?
Soon it too will be devoured
As will I.
danbit5- 10-09-2005
its hard to comment on this one. makes me sad.
the bridge was very interesting but you said soon it will be devoured too. :(
sadly i think i know what your saying.
anyway even at that i like it.
vehnillamasochist- 10-10-2005
I feel like that all of the time it feels like
PickOutYourCloud- 10-10-2005
thank you both for your comments. I'm always glad to see people's reaction. I really appreciate it.
vehnillamasochist- 10-11-2005
U r most welcome!
Talula- 10-12-2005
oh my God I love it!
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