Trio of Poetry
And now a few pieces of poetry. Please keep in mind that this is not my strong suit, so any comments are welcomed! Just be gentle. :wink: The look in your eyes The feeling of safety in your arms The tenderness of your touch The joy of just being near you. These are things that I will miss But most of all, I will miss You. The light slowly fades from the sky and darkness Creeps over the land and settles in for the night But even in the dark of Night the stars still shine And we are not alone Tiny streams trickle down the Mountain and soon join the rivers. The rivers rush through the lands and into the arms of the ocean. The waters of the ocean travel the world and eventually drift onto shore.

again, you're awesome Denise.

vehnillamasochist post your own! I love reading other peoples'. Plus, I find it's easier to do it online then standing and watching someone read it. I promise, I'll be nice. And I know SteelLilly will be too. :D

i think it's lovely. silly thing, don't be scared to post!

nice work... :shock: I'm such a bad writer!

oh darn you caught me in a lie... here's my poem of the day: Roses are red Vilots are blue I'm a bad writer And I suck at rhyming too :mrgreen:

I love them all. You better keep displaying your work. I'm getting so inspired. :)

Thanks so much. I always thought that if I could've lived in a different time, I either would've been a hippy or a Native American--before the europeans landed. Nature just plays souch a big role in everything I write and I love being outside.